Recrafting using Show not Tell !

Her face turned red !She walked while stomping her she slammed her door and sat on her bed.

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Tears plummeted down to her sheets while she hid under her duvet

His eyes were as big as saucers !He was flossing & jumping with joy high fiving everyone he saw.

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Happy tears rolled down his face while he was watching a happy movie.

My legs were tired !My legs were trembling I was about to collapse with exhaustion.

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I stopped at half point to rest my aching legs if I didn't I think they fall off.

The man walked down the road !The man jogged to speedway wondering if he missed the race.

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The man stumbled home his eyes swelling up with tears.  😢

When I did this I Was Talking about why My family connects with this place.......... Morere Hot  Springs. Something I might do better next time is ad ME to the picture 😋 .
I found drawing the picture difficult because I forgot what angle I was drawing it from.

Summerising The Shortcut.

                Summerising The Shortcut. The shortcut is a book My reading teacher told us to then write words that we don't Know what they mean then write what we think then the dictionary meaning. Then it was time to sumerise

Interviewing a character is asking a question and having the person you asked answer this is how you find out about them. In my book I interviewed August off the movie Wonder.... But I to read some of the book and pretend I was him instead. This was fun but next time I might write even more facts.

This is whats inside us weird but cool.  When I was doing this I was learning about what each part of our body does to keep us alive.  For example our rib cage  protects our organs + our brain controls our whole body people call it THE BIG BOSS OF THE BODY. I enjoyed putting my body together and exploring what each part does for us. It was a bit hard drawing the outline though.  Next time I might practice my drawing.

When I did this math about weight I was learning to use grams and see how much milligrams was in it  same with kilograms. Next time I might do harder questions. Overall I enjoyed it very much.

Winter  wonderland  When I did this piece of writing I was learning to set the scene. It took a while editing it. But my friends helped me all the way. I found challenging adding in pictures it still looks cute. Next time I might write more than I did. 😉😋ツ